Challenged by the talented attorney-author Veronica Forand, the writers from RWW are supposed to write a 100-word fiction story using these three words: Coffee, Spring, and lizard. I wrote my story in 15 minutes and it's exactly 100 words. Enjoy! I hope you made it here from Veronica's page http://www.veronicaforand.com then head over to read Susan Scott Shelley's flash fiction at http:// www.susanscottshelley.com/ #!blog/c1cod
“That lizard is so sluggish.” Julie sipped her coffee. “He
hasn’t moved in an hour.”
Her neighbor, Sylvia, ignored the comment and snipped
Hibiscus blooms. “I love Spring.”
Julie studied the lizard. “Do you think he’s alive?”
Her friend peered at the statue-like lizard. “Not sure but he
certainly has good balance.”
Julie walked inside to answer a ringing phone. With
warp-like speed the lizard crawled across the screen, onto the wicker patio
table, and into Julie’s pink coffee cup. Sylvia covered her mouth to keep from
screaming—or laughing.
Julie reappeared. “What’s wrong?”“Um, apparently Mr. Lizard likes lattes.”
Haha, coffee drinking lizard! A rare breed.
ReplyDeleteHe must be a lizard who writes. Every writer I know drinks coffee except one!
DeleteFun stuff. ♥
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Steve!
DeleteLove it!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Enjoyed the challenge, Veronica.
DeleteLOL,I loved it!!! This was great!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, JJ. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteAt least she saw him jump in BEFORE she drank from the cup :-) And yes, now I will be peeking into my mug before I take a sip! :-)
ReplyDeleteI know. I always check my shoes, too. You're welcome!! ;)
DeleteSuch a fun story! Thanks for making me laugh!
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, Betty. I have fun with humorous scenes.
DeleteLizards and Lattes - you'll have to create a pet store that also has a coffee shop! :)
ReplyDeleteHa! Not a bad idea.
DeleteHa! Love Brenda's idea!
ReplyDeleteYep! Me, too.
DeleteVery funny, Beth! Great flash fiction.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Mikki. I really enjoyed yours.
DeleteHaha! He was a crafty lizard. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteHe's a clever little guy, for sure. Thanks, Xio!
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